Autumn
Evil God
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Post by Autumn on Feb 28, 2006 19:20:00 GMT -6
Something i wrote last summer and really like still. i havn't got round to using them yet but have a pretty good idea of how it should be sung (hence the "//'s")
The Grey Of The Storm Blinds All Hope
verse: Blood on the runes // Skies a grey Alone I stand // Waiting for you The thaw // Leaves cracks in the ground Shadows // Stretch over open land
chorus: The flames // Burn // A guiding light The winds // turn // A chilling breath
Outside a weary voice // Weathered by the storm Hope is drowned
verse: Haunted by the voice // Of a child Lost // On the raging coast The nightmares return // As they were in another time
chorus: The flames // Burn // A guiding light The winds turn // A chilling breath
Outside a weary voice // Weathered by the storm Hope is drowned
let me know what you think
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Post by Guitar Demon on Feb 28, 2006 19:31:17 GMT -6
again, nice job kinda blind guardian-ish though it could just be because im listning to them heh i like how the chorus has the same amount of syllables (sp) in the two lines
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Autumn
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Post by Autumn on Feb 28, 2006 19:34:47 GMT -6
it was meant to be kinda like neurosis style sung, slow, that distinct style steve von till has (if you know them). but yeah i guess it could be sung like BG heh, i took my time with this one when i did it. for ages i didn't really like it and this winter found it and liked it again
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goatface
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The Berries Taste Like Burning!! >_<'
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Post by goatface on Dec 12, 2006 2:34:33 GMT -6
Aww Crap!! I lost that song i think when i had to wipe my computer : (, Can I have it back : ). I remember I liked it but it's cool to see the lyrics if I didn't understand some the first time I heard it.
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Autumn
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Post by Autumn on Dec 14, 2006 21:31:09 GMT -6
haha the song title became the album title of Ellylldan's first release - which is an instrumental piece. so thats why you prob didnt understand it the first time you heard it going to finish this oneday. will prob go into some sort of sombre folk project...
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goatface
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The Berries Taste Like Burning!! >_<'
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Post by goatface on Dec 15, 2006 2:10:12 GMT -6
Ah... then that's why I didn't remember that much lyrics whenI heard it lol
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