stuka
Metal Warrior
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Post by stuka on Feb 28, 2006 20:19:46 GMT -6
autumn, your lyrics are rather impressive so i decided to post some of my own. feedback is greatly appreciated.
After the war has its way with the world the land swallows rivers of blood and the sun shows its face once again the metal upon the plains shine
I stare out at the hills and remember the pain, suffering, and bloodlust Twas it all in vain? Will it come again? I lost nothing yet lost everything The sun gives new hope to me this isnt how itll always be
I walk through the field of the dead where the grass is always stained red sunlight glitters on sword and spear despite death, my brothers are near
i raise my hand to block the sun gazing at the field we fought and won many of my brothers died defending our home now theyre proudly watching us from above reunited once again with those they love those who survive are never alone
We honor those who fought and died Buried them but have not cried we rejoyce for they are in the land of youth
they watch over us, we toast their name for them we win fortune, glory, and fame to our blood we pass down tools of war for we will see our brothers once more
i wrote this awhile, probably to bathory. i like it
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Post by Guitar Demon on Feb 28, 2006 20:32:25 GMT -6
moving this to lyrics section
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stuka
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Post by stuka on Feb 28, 2006 20:38:34 GMT -6
good call, my bad
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Post by Guitar Demon on Feb 28, 2006 20:41:07 GMT -6
no problem, its a new section so also your maiden avatar doesnt show up anymore, you should get a new one
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stuka
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Post by stuka on Feb 28, 2006 20:46:21 GMT -6
alright, ill look around
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