stuka
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Post by stuka on Feb 28, 2006 20:40:37 GMT -6
so i wrote this for my girlfriend last week, i was aiming for that charming irish mood that i love about bardic songs.
One misty morn I found myself wanderin round the town lookin for something, anything to cure me of me frown
Passing through the village square I saw a pretty lass standin there wearin a smile and tossin her hair a quick reply to my hasty prayer
So I gathered up me courage buckled me kilt fast strode across the village square to speak with this beautiful lass
But before I approached her I sent to her a letter an invitation to come out the next night in the fine frosty winter weather
On the day it 'twas delivered, Upon readin it she looked my way gave me a beautiful smile and nod that i remember to this day
Then i did smile, for more reasons than one the misty clouds broke right then and i finally saw the sun
if youre sharp, you may catch the small braveheart reference, heh.
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Post by Guitar Demon on Feb 28, 2006 20:42:34 GMT -6
have you given this to laurel? good stuff, not sure if i got the reference or not
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stuka
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Post by stuka on Feb 28, 2006 21:04:45 GMT -6
not sure how i should give it to her, im thinking about waiting til i have music to it then give her the first EP. the reference is in the part about weather........
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Post by Guitar Demon on Feb 28, 2006 21:05:55 GMT -6
but it wasnt winter in the film, nor frosty... i thought it was in the whole thing how he saw her through the crowed like he does in the film
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stuka
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Post by stuka on Feb 28, 2006 21:16:32 GMT -6
hmmmm didnt think of that. i was thinking more of the "fine scottish weather. rainin straight down and slightly to the side" but since it hasnt rained for awhile here, i changed it to winter. meh
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Post by MorbidGuitar on Mar 1, 2006 1:44:48 GMT -6
wow this forum kicks ass already!
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Autumn
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Post by Autumn on Mar 1, 2006 1:55:27 GMT -6
that was brilliant stuka. nicely put together and yeah this section is awesome! i'll put more up soon
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stuka
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Post by stuka on Mar 2, 2006 21:05:52 GMT -6
thanks man. i do enjoy seeing what other people have written, its neat
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