Post by goatface on Dec 12, 2006 2:43:55 GMT -6
I was wondering if it was any good, I'm not sure what my opinions on it is but the vocal melody is something of a grunge/metalish type a sound, but yeah tell me what you guys think. I'm kindda wanting to brush it up, but tell me if some lines in the song are lame, or if it's all lame lol, believe me I don't mind but yeah here it is.
Once Kept
Hey
Your hands are dirty too
What’s the difference ‘tween
Between me, between me and you
Blood across your face
Snuffing out your soul
Do you still hinder me
Why won’t you let it go
See
But still not with your eyes
What’s the big surprise
Choke on all the lies
Your lies
I only wanted to be free
From all the pain you’ve given me
Bloody and broken on your step
That was the man that you once kept
You turned your back and walked away
When all the times I screamed your name
Tearing my heart out while I wept
I was the man that you once kept
Drink
The blood is pouring through
The death you’re breathing too
What have you come to do
I knew
Scream
Your lips are turning blue
Darkest dream come true
I never wanted to
Kill you
I only wanted to be free
From all the pain you’ve given me
Bloody and broken on your step
That was the man that you once kept
Deceptive tears of pooling shame
You’ve come to kill me once again
Tearing my life out while I wept
I was the man that you once kept
Hey
My hands are dirty too
Now there’s no difference ‘tween
Between me, between me and you
Shovel to the throat
And what a thing to do
The water cleanses me and now I’m rid of you
I only wanted to be free
From all the pain you’ve given me
Bloody and broken on your step
That was the man that you once kept
You turned your back and walked away
When all the times I screamed your name
Tearing my heart out while I wept
I was the man that you once kept
I was the man that you once kept
Your hands are dirty too
What’s the difference ‘tween
Between me, between me and you
Blood across your face
Snuffing out your soul
Do you still hinder me
Why won’t you let it go
See
But still not with your eyes
What’s the big surprise
Choke on all the lies
Your lies
I only wanted to be free
From all the pain you’ve given me
Bloody and broken on your step
That was the man that you once kept
You turned your back and walked away
When all the times I screamed your name
Tearing my heart out while I wept
I was the man that you once kept
Drink
The blood is pouring through
The death you’re breathing too
What have you come to do
I knew
Scream
Your lips are turning blue
Darkest dream come true
I never wanted to
Kill you
I only wanted to be free
From all the pain you’ve given me
Bloody and broken on your step
That was the man that you once kept
Deceptive tears of pooling shame
You’ve come to kill me once again
Tearing my life out while I wept
I was the man that you once kept
Hey
My hands are dirty too
Now there’s no difference ‘tween
Between me, between me and you
Shovel to the throat
And what a thing to do
The water cleanses me and now I’m rid of you
I only wanted to be free
From all the pain you’ve given me
Bloody and broken on your step
That was the man that you once kept
You turned your back and walked away
When all the times I screamed your name
Tearing my heart out while I wept
I was the man that you once kept
I was the man that you once kept